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Book story line idea?

Friday, January 2nd, 2009
clomtancy asked:

I have writen in here some ideas ive had and want to see what people think of this one.

We probably will never have the “Star Wars” ballistic missile defense system, but they did some upwith some other ideas.

One of them which i think is still in production if not in use, is a laser mounted aboard Boeing 777 jets (somewhere in the nose).

When we prove its usefull, a terrorist group notices and plans to steal a laser and plane if possible

Now the plane has been found but the laser is missing. Planes, rockets, and even a space shuttle come down by its deadly fire power.

Now the world faces a weapon they are not totaly sure how to stop, and where it is.

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What do you think of my story? Do you think it would make a good movie? Comment on the book and the characters?

Saturday, December 27th, 2008
Jebediah F asked:

Hayride

Not for the faint hearted…

By ****************************

Thanks to…………………
Carley Barnes, Max Lynch, Nick Enzien, Nick Abate, Noah Kurtz, Ethan Daly, Kimmie Kyer, Eliza Jelenik, Stephen Kim, Brendan Daily, Kennedy Cocoozzo, Ellery Bianco, Chris Thompson, Jack Rittenhouse, Mike Myers, Freddy Krueger, Samara, Jason, and a very special thanks to Double M Haunted Hayride who inspired me to write this book.

Chapter 1

” As you all know 5 to the power of two is 25 and also that…blahblahblah”

I **** school. My name is John Roberts. I am in 8th grade and I go to a boarding school called Wilcox Academy. I know, stupid name, but I didn’t come up with it. I was in math class with Ms. Angus teaching us. Let me tell you something. You might tell me, your teacher is so boring, but believe me, the only reason she is a math teacher, is because she was there when numbers were created. Anyway, here at Wilcox I have a big group of friends. There are 12 of them not including me. Let me tell you about them. Let’s start off with Nick Smith. He is so sly, he is the best spier I know, heck, if I didn’t tell him all my secrets, I wouldn’t be able to tell them to anyone else because I’d be afraid he was watching me. Sometimes I wonder how he gets all the money to buy all of his gadgets and tools and things. It’s as if he owns a spy shop. Ok next I’m going to talk about the coolest girl I know, Kennedy Roberts. She is so cool and sporty, sometimes it’s just like you are hanging out with your best friend that’s a guy when you are hanging out with her. Next is Eliza Depp, this is strongest girl.. Scratch that.. Strongest person, I know. She’s beaten everyone in my homeroom at arm wrestling. And I heard, in her old school, she sent a kid to the hospital because he said Johnny Depp was stupid. Next is Stephen Johnson, he is the funniest kid I know and he is the only one who can be a fair match for Eliza in a fight. But he wouldn’t hurt a fly so that skill doesn’t really apply to him yet. Next is Max Davis. He is kind of just a normal kid who is great at airsoft BB gun wars. Which ***** for him because no sorts of guns are allowed at Wilcox. But there is a shooting class for 8th graders and they have all sorts of guns there, but they are kept locked up in a wooden shed which really isn’t safe because people could break in there very easily. But Max has a stash of BB guns under his bed. Next there is Enzien who absolutely LOVES horror movies. He knows about every single type of monster there is. Next is Carly Anderson who is so nice but if you do something to her she can hold a big grudge against you. Next is Ethan Taylor who is the sportiest kid I know. He is also so cool; all of the girls think he’s so dreamy and cool. He is one of the popular kids in the school and I am one of his best friends. He does baseball. Basketball, football, wrestling, boxing, snowboarding, lacrosse, hockey, soccer, you name it he does it. Next is Brendan Moore who is really short but man is he awesome. He would do anything to protect his friends. Next is Kimmie Callahan who is a model and she can be a brat but can be nice. And then we have Noah Logan; he is really funny and is a leader, not follower. And then finally there is Ellery Harris, she has been our best friend and in fact, she was the one who got us all together, Ellery was the smartest and had the best grades.

School was over and we were all hanging out in my dorm. My roommate is Nick. We were all discussing what Ellery should do that night. You see, if you have an A+ average for one whole year, then you get a free pass where one night of your choice, you get to go do something. Ellery had gotten that award so we thought we would help her decide where to go.

” You could go do laser tag” Kimmie suggested

” Nah. That’s no fun when I don’t know the other people,” Ellery said

“How about the fair” Carly said, ” Tonight is the closing night.”

” Eww. I **** the smell of horses”

” I have an idea. How about you go to the new haunted hayride over by the mall. No one ever goes to it but it seems really good, plus Halloween is in two days and you love getting scared.”

” Oh my god John you are a genius. I’ll do that.”

” Ya, it seems cool.” I said, ” Ok we should all get ready for dinner. You guys should go back to your dorms.”

After everyone left Nick said “Ellery’s gonna have fun tonight”

“Ya, I feel bad for Enzien though, he loves that kind of stuff.”

” Ya we should probably head down to the kitchen. Remember? We have to do kitchen duty for a week because you pulled the fire alarm.”

” Oh ya, Hahha, good times, good times.”

After dinner, the school chauffer drove Ellery to the hayride and we all wished her a good time, and then went to bed.

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Would this be a good story to rebuild for today?

Sunday, December 14th, 2008
markwildstar asked:

Book idea??
I have another book idea i want some oppinons on. Understant it started back in about 1991 and it looked like it was going to last some 20 books but i never got it past the last part.

Please read and let me know if you think it would be worth restructuring into today’s world.

Tom Mitchell is the best fighter pilot in the world. No one can touch him.

When Russian Seperatists seize a large portion of Russia and threatenMoscow, NATO gets involved. The Red Movement (the enemy) uses the situation to invade eastern europe in a attempt to stem NATO’s response in Russia.

In steps Tom Mitchell. He loses his wingman on a run against a RM dam providing electricicity in occupied parts of Russia. But in the end he helps stop the RM advance long enough for Marines and Moscow guard to break out of Moscow and start to turn the tide.

Mitchel returns home (thought i might do some book on his life for the second book)

Third book: Mitchell is considering retiring. He’s a hero, and

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9 hours ago
things have calmed down in Europe and Russia. However remaints of the RM have resurfaced and plan revenge.

This camefrom a idea i had acouple years before this story got created.

They develop a under water base with a huge laser system. Using a series of mirrors they create a deadly web. Anything (person, ship) inside the web simple disintegrates.

As the world’s navies are wrecked by this laser, Mitchell comes out of the reserves (this originaly was going to kill him) and helps try to find the weapon.

Soon a sub finds a depth that goes under the laser and discovers the base.

Mitchell leads a air attack on the base but the RM has planes also (on islands). Mitchell’s main F-16 is destroyed but he escapes.

Suddendly they learn of a new threat. The RM has two nuclear missiles one for washingont and onefor moscow. In a race against time Mitchell sends his replacement F-4 phantom into a crash into the laser. Now the SEALS must disable the base before nuclear war.

9 hours ago
Mitchell survives and comes back home. He’s wounded, tired, and ready to quit being a hero.

But a friend in the pentagon talks him into a new assignment. TOP GUN for Falcon pilots.

As Mitchell takes his new job trouble spreads in the Carribean. Castro wants power and the world no longer has a good navy to fight him.

As the carribean falls to his attakcs the U.S. must figure out what to do.

However, there is probems at home. Militia members are tired of a government that seems unable to please its people anymore.

Many military units also spilt as civil war erupts.

Mitchell is offered a chance to leave his school andwork for the president as National Security Advisor, and barely begins this job when the president and Vice President are killed.

Now the government is inshambles andeveryone looks to their main hero for leadership.

Meanwhile Europe, damaged by war, has changed shape. a new **** group,. the easter alliance has formed with some parts of europe.

9 hours ago
sorry keep reading. not done yet

Mitchell takes the presidency as the Eastern Allaince allies with castro.

America is torn inhalf and no one is willingto fight togetehr even against a invasion.

Suddendly Mitchell as president is warned they will be invaded if he does not surrender. Facing a dire situation he agrees to a sort of surrender. He is told he will remain president while the country (and world) will answer to the Alliance.

But the alliance throws him out.

China and Japan hit the west coast and Europe the east.

But As strong as the alliance seems, Asia is in bad shape.

Now Mitchell, a exiled president, tries to form the militaty back into one group to repell the invasion.

However after a few attacks, the asians say they cant afford to stay.

With the west unoccupied, the ***** plan to fully invade.

Now Mitchell must make a sacrifice. He fakes his death, andtakes on a new mission.

Using a old battleship and carrier he forms a batlte carrier.

9 hours ago
now with a assorment of odd shipsand people they fight the easternallance across the atlantic and europe.

by the end the eastern alliance cancels its invasion and pulls out.

Mitchell returns but gives the presidency to a friend.

Now comes (so far) mitchell’s last mission.

Castro is still inpower and a threat.

Mitchell decides to fly to Havana and talk to him. But no one but a few know that he has a targeting device on him.

Mitchel guides a laser guided missile into the presidential palace killing castro and (at first) killing him.

ok so far thats the endof the series.

I thought a while back of having him wounded but surviving and facing crisis in the middle east and asia.

but i have also thought of ways to modernize it..

What if China was the Russia of the story, N. Korea starts a war. things like that.

please let me know what you think.

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Does anyone know the name of this book?

Tuesday, September 2nd, 2008
mumei asked:

I read it (it’s a series) when I was younger. They were new to our library (2oo3/o4) and I was the first to read them. All I can remember is that I really liked the story line and the imagery, and my clue to people who might know what this is: In the beginning of the first book there is a guy laying on a table with an automated laser above him. He is restrained and the laser cuts away his skin in small square intervals. I remember that he stays alive, and skinless through the series. I also remember something about them being trapped on an automated future-technologic ship that has gone awry and is trying to kill the passengers.

Thanks for any help ^-^

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